I grabbed this only because of the number of reads. Has to
be something about it, right? I mean the amount of readership and positive
feedback cannot be wrong – well, it was.
As characters go Eric and Isabelle left much to be desired.
Eric spent most if his time recounting a dream and telling us about it, as if
he was telling a story of his dream and not living the horror that was
unfolding around him. Isabelle wasn’t very believable considering the timeframe
of the story and the events that unfolded about her.
The plot dragged as the storyline was halted time and time
again with tedious explanations of the current events or Eric’s dreams. I think
it stands on its own without the constant reminders, over reads and more
telling.
For the reader … um … if it catches your fancy, have a read.
For the writer, you will get some sense on killing action
and plotting then have a read.
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