I grabbed this only because of the number of reads. Has to
be something about it, right? I mean the amount of readership and positive
feedback cannot be wrong – well, it was.

The plot dragged as the storyline was halted time and time
again with tedious explanations of the current events or Eric’s dreams. I think
it stands on its own without the constant reminders, over reads and more
telling.
For the reader … um … if it catches your fancy, have a read.
For the writer, you will get some sense on killing action
and plotting then have a read.